What stood out to me the most was the comment that in my last video that I needed to make more eye contact and it was easy to tell that I was reading off a script which I was oops;) So this time I didn't use a script and tried to make it more personal. I enjoyed reading the feedback of people who said they would actually use my idea and they thought it was a good solution.
What did you change, based on the feedback?
Like I said before, this time I didn't use a script, I just went off memorization and spoke more freely. I think this helped me be more personal and show more interest in my idea. I am definitely more comfortable on my third time filming this than I was the first time. My time was longer this time since I wasn't reading off a script and I had to think about what I was saying more but overall I think I improved thanks to the feedback from other students.
Hello Teagan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your pitch. I do not think you spoke too quickly and you were easy to understand. The background was a little distracting but besides that, I think it was great. I would most definitely use your idea because there have been many times I walked around the library looking for a seat but had no luck. If you keep doing as you are, I think this will be successful!
Hey Teagan,
ReplyDeleteI liked your pitch because it was delivered smoothly and very natural. I like your information it very consisted and you went in depth for each of your examples. as a college student, I can relate to your service because it is very hard finding seats if I am trying to plan a study group.